Peer Review for Diego Alcantara

For this first peer review, I chose to review a member of my group who is working on the genre I did for Project 1 and I am hoping to provide some valuable feedback for his project, specifically on the form.

Diego's Project- Computer Engineering: A Comprehensive Guide to Writing in the Field

After reviewing his project and looking over the general form of the QRG, I had just a few comments:

• Add more white space and cut out the large paragraph portions or shorten them
• Try making it look less like a paper with pictures, and more like an article with imagery
• Add more images and hyperlinks

I talked with Diego in class before I even peer reviewed his project to give him some tips on editing the format, so I think I definitely helped him out in the sense that I was able to describe to him hot to lessen the visual impact on the reader.

The rough cut provided all the needed information, it just needed some fine tuning on the form.

Overall, I could really tell that he put a lot of time and effort into his project, and I really admired that he took the time to really explain the differences between writing in his field versus other fields.