Open Post to Peer Reviewers

Here is the working link to my current rough cut of my project.

Here's what you need to know:

• This is still a very rough cut and I am working on reforming what I want to say as my self-reflection. I understand I still need to work on some of the "fluff" and grammar, so just keep that in mind please!
• I am already aware that it is not long enough and still needs plenty of information, I just want to make sure I'm currently in the right direction.
• Honestly, I don't think my paper has really good strengths right now, but I know it will shortly.