Local Revision: Variety

Again, this was a step I covered in my personal revision prior to working on the blogs for deadline 5, so I made sure to cut out most of my run on sentences and only leave those that were required for comprehension. I made sure to include a good mix of both short and long sentences as well as short bulleted phrases, easily digestible by the reader and I left space between paragraphs, allowing an easier read for the eye.