Editorial Report A

Revised Rough Draft:

Intro:

• Short clip from the video I found on women fighting for inequality through the years and our accomplishment of getting the Equal Pay Act signed into law by President Kennedy in 1963.
• Follow with a clip of Patricia Arquette at the Oscars, calling for women’s equality
• Video Clip of myself: “In the United States, in 2015, the average American woman makes 77 cents to every dollar a man makes. Or at least that’s what we’ve heard for the last ten years or so. Supposedly, after accounting for all differences in paid hours worked, experience, education, and full-time versus part-time work, a woman still makes 92-96 cents for every dollar a man makes.
• Clip of John Oliver’s talk show sharing his comedic view on the idea of “quantifying” the wage gap and how it can be solved
• Video of me: “Although the pay disparity for women is said to be improving, the same cannot necessarily be said for women in the entertainment and media industry.

So here's what got better:

- Obviously the revised piece, although about the same length, is more detailed and includes for video clips.
- The new edited version broadens the topic to women in more than just Hollywood.

- I found more videos and clips of the struggle of women through history to really show the evolvement of women and how we have gotten to where we are today.

- Change as far as form is that I have actually added into the rough draft the voice overs and pictures and owned in on an opening video clip.

Final Cut: Project 3

Here's what changed:

- So in the final video, I decided not to include any clips of myself and I changed the intro to the current level of wage inequality between men and women in the US as discussed by several news outlets and just how bad the wage gap really is.

- I also made the video more about women in several industries rather than just focusing on the entertainment industry in order to include morr information.