Peer Review of Rigo Avila

Here is a selection of Rigo's script from one of his editorial reports.

1. I decided to review Rigo's content for the intro part of his video on the new F-35 being designed by Lockheed Martin. I chose this because I was a little confused about what he was trying to accomplish in his first cut of the project. However, after seeing his revised rough cut, I better understand it.
2. I think I helped a little because I am actually pretty knowledgeable about the new F-35 considering I am pursuing a career as a pilot in the Navy, so I reminded him that he needs to be careful with how technical he gets when discussing all of the specs on the new plane, especially to a likely less educated audience on the topic.
3. I really like how he changed the footage to video from photos because I think that visual change for the viewer will make a big difference in their comprehension of the topic.