Sunday, April 24, 2016

Peer Review for Sofia Haserot

Here is the link to Sofia's video essay.

- I chose to focus on the content in Sofia's final cut of her video essay.
- I mentioned that although providing her personal experience with the problem was useful, she could have delved even deeper with that, and made a much stronger emotional appeal to the audience.
I think she did a very good job of incorporating a variety of still images and video clips, so I really liked how she edited the video!


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