Peer Review of Fernando Coronado

Here is a link to Fernando's rough script of his project.

1. I decided to review Fernando's content in his rough draft for this project. I did a podcast for my last project, so I was hoping to be able to provide some commentary on his argument for this project.
2. I made the suggestion to him to add in some more support for his argument by finding similar cases to the problem he is discussing that have existed with previous video games. I think for a podcast you really need a lot of strong content, especially content you can talk about and that doesn't have to be visual, so that's why I made the suggestion I did.
3. One thing I really liked about his rough draft thus far is that it actually already has a lot of support for his topic, and he has a very well-written rough draft which is really good to have as of now in the timeline of this project.