Peer Review for Tim Wils

Tim's Content Outline

1. I chose to review Tim's content outline, mostly because of the fact that we are both working on a video essay and I wanted to see the ideas he had come up with on how to format his video essay.
2. Tim's post was very word heavy, so I tried to help him step back from all the information he was already providing and really have a picture in his head of how exactly he was going to communicate all of that in the form of a video essay.
3. I just reminded to make sure he is including the conventions of a video essay ad thinking about those already now, before he has begun the production of his project.
4. I really liked how I could already tell exactly what Tim's project was going to be about, just from the first line of his outline. he provided a lot of detail and information, which I think I will definitely help him out come time for production.