Sunday, April 24, 2016

Revised Post to Peer Reviewers

What you Need to Know About my Fine Cut:

  • First off, you should know that I will be discussing the gender wage gap in the US, and WHY it still persists.
  • I go over several personal stories of women and I highlight celebrities because they have been the women to speak out the most about their personal experience and find video clips of.
  • I know there may be a few editing mistakes as far as video cuts and everything, I did my best with the software I had and I think I came up with a pretty cool result!
  •  I really like the variety of clips I had and the voice over, video, picture combination I incorporated. Let me know what you think!
  • Here is the Fine Cute of my video essay!


1 comment:

  1. Hi Cynthia! I know this is too late but maybe this peer review can be applied for projects and future assignments. I think my major critique is that so much of the project wasn't your own ideas. It's similar to writing an essay that's composed of more quotes than your own words. I really liked all of the clips you had, but I tend to think you let them do so much of the talking that you didn't exactly do so much of the arguing. Just next time try to put a little more of your own voice into the project and really own it as your own instead of having the clips argue for you! Other than that I really liked it and I'm really pissed about the gender wage gap and it was really cool to see all of your evidence for what you think the cause is so that was really good! Excellent job!

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